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Hochgeladen am: 24.07.2018 22:45 | Northants

Female vocal pop ballad


Bewertung COMMUNITY
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 6.0
  • Arrangement: 6.0
  • Performance: 6.0
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 7.0
  • Räumlichkeit: 7.0
  • Dynamik: 7.0
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 7.0

Bewertung HOFA
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 5
  • Arrangement: 5
  • Performance: 6
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 5
  • Räumlichkeit: 4
  • Dynamik: 4
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 5
Analyse HOFA

Songwriting & Arrangement:

This song is a typical pop song that works in the context of this genre. The songwriting is fine but could be a little bit better regarding variety and creativity. Therefore, the song appears to be a little bit weak in regard to the overall arrangement of the different parts and elements. We noticed that your song has a very flat suspense curve. It makes sense to separate the different passages of the song, in order to give the listener a feeling of suspense. Therefore the song has a more captivating effect. The chorus of your song could stand out a bit more from the verses to achieve a stronger progression and to make the "hookline" even more catchy.

Recording / Performance:

All instruments are "tight" and played to the beat. This is an important aspect that significantly influences the quality of the song. In most aspects the different elements of the piece fit the mood quite well. Nevertheless, there are still possibilities for optimization. Make sure that the sound selection of the instruments, the arrangement and the lyrics always convey the same mood and increase the effect of the song together.

Sound:

We noticed that the overall sound of your mix is quite bright. You could dial back the high frequencies a little bit. You could also make the frequency response of your mix more natural - we can still hear potential here. This may be due to unmusical volumes of individual tracks, as well as corresponding EQing. The dynamic of the vocals seem a bit uncontrolled in this song - in some places syllables get a little lost in the song context, while others stand out very loudly. Use a compressor to get this problem under control. In principle, you should compress the vocals as much as possible - but of course only as long as the material still sounds natural and does not "pump". By reducing the dynamics with a compressor the vocals cut through the mix better and speech intelligibility is significantly increased. You used a little too many creative effects that distract from the core of the piece. The mix is quite overloaded with effects.

The following screenshot shows a picture of a spectral analyser where you see the frequency curves of your mix. The lower curve describes the average energy level, whereas the upper curve shows the corresponding peak hold per band:

Gesamt-Score

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