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Dawn

Robinhyerincho

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Hochgeladen am: 12.07.2018 09:32 | CA

The sound of paint mixing is used in this music. That means is I tried to express the chaos of emotion. Otherwise, Melodic Piano means " let's pass through the chaos with one remaining hope. "

Narration.

We are all going somewhere in this world full of chaos.

Universe, like deep dark ocean. Full of people.

But there is no one when I look around.

I can feel warmth and follow the light that leads me to you, at last. We will walk together.

Through 'time',

we will learn that we share each other.

Happiness.

Foreverness.

And the future.


Bewertung COMMUNITY
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 8.8
  • Arrangement: 8.2
  • Performance: 8.4
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 8.1
  • Räumlichkeit: 8.6
  • Dynamik: 8.4
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 8.4

Bewertung HOFA
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 2
  • Arrangement: 5
  • Performance: 8
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 5
  • Räumlichkeit: 4
  • Dynamik: 6
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 6
Analyse HOFA

Songwriting & Arrangement:

You submitted a quite complex and interesting sounddesign track. It's very hard to evaluate the composition and mixing though because the track has no recognizable song structure nor comprehensible melodic lines. Technically this is not a song but a sounddesign track therefore we are not able to judge the composition as it doesn't follow classical musical rules.

You managed to build up an interesting, atmospheric emotion. Your composition seems very chaotic and a bit unstructured but that seems to be intentional, so this aspect fits the emotional statement. ;)

Recording / Performance:

Since the sounds used were all created "in the box", we can't say much about the recording and the musical performance. However, the tracks are all neatly programmed.

We especially appreciate your sounddesign. Many of these sounds are a lot of work to reach and they're very suitable for this track - well done!

We noticed a disturbing high buzz around 9 kHz. We guess your intention was to make a noise floor with this sound but it makes headaches when listening to be honest. Think about whether you really need this sound to "tell your story" or at least make it much quieter so it doesn't hurt. ;)

Sound:

The mixing is kind of a weak spot of your track. We noticed that the leveling in your mix is not always practical. Some elements (in this case thats mainly the noise floors and sound effects) are a bit too loud and stand out too much while others get lost in the mix. As suitable levels and proportions are the most important basis for every mix it makes sense to invest a little more time into a correct roughmix to reach suitable hierarchic orders for all the signals.

You used a lot of huge reverbs, delays, etc. which is very suitable in this case. This leads to a very big sonic image and a complex and deep sound that supports the emotional value of you track - well done!

We found your panoramic settings and the phase positions to be a little too wide. This can quickly occur, especially when using stereo widening effects. Try to check your mix in mono occasionally when mixing. If signals should then be very quiet or even disappear, there are problems with the mono compatibility. A goniometer or a correlation meter will also show you this problem very well. ;)

The following screenshot shows a picture of a spectral analyser where you see the frequency curves of your mix. The lower curve describes the average energy level, whereas the upper curve shows the corresponding peak hold per band:

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