Skip to Content

A Perfect Storm

Star Eternal

Länge: 03:39

Hochgeladen am: 01.06.2018 14:12 | Victoria, Australia

A Perfect Storm

Music By Tim Bainbridge

Lyrics By Tim Bainbridge

Performed by “Star Eternal”


Vocals Tim Bainbridge & Mary Zimmer

For Album “Archetypica”

©2017 Bainbridge

So that’s life.. deal with it

At some point everything goes to shit

Now I don’t mean to trivialise your pain

Coz no one can ever say they feel the same

So when your demons and devils encircle

And your facing the longest road home

Hold On

It’s one more day when you don’t believe yet you

Carry On

And sail to the stars - from a perfect storm

I’m darkness, despair and pain

At some point everyone hears my name

But you’ll turn up your collar walk my wayward streets

Coz its only with consent can I play for keeps

So when your demons and devils encircle

And your facing the longest road home

Hold On

It’s one more day when you don’t believe yet you

Carry On

And sail to the stars - from a perfect...oh

Solo

Hold On

It’s one more day when you don’t believe yet you

Carry On

And sail to the stars - from a perfect storm


Bewertung COMMUNITY
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 7.1
  • Arrangement: 6.9
  • Performance: 7.6
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 7.5
  • Räumlichkeit: 7.1
  • Dynamik: 7.2
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 7.8

Bewertung HOFA
  • Song
  • Songwriting: 7
  • Arrangement: 7
  • Performance: 6
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: 5
  • Räumlichkeit: 6
  • Dynamik: 6
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: 5
Analyse HOFA

Songwriting & Arrangement:

Your songs belongs to the Genre Punk Rock and Metal and has some Green Day influences. We really like the melodies and the overall structure of the song which is somehow complex and shows a variety of musicality. Especially the guitar solo is very well-written and stands over the song. However, the vocals and the music sometimes don’t fit together very well.

Recording / Performance:

The programming of the drums appears to be a little bit artificial. They do fit the song but we suggest to put a little bit more effort into the programming itself. We also suggest to not only work with presets of typical libraries like Superior Drummer to work out the details a little bit better. Beside the melodies and the overall performance we noticed that the guitars sometimes don’t match the timing of the song. Therefore, it’s best to keep an emphasis on the recording stage to get a proper recording done before the editing and the mixing process.

Sound:

The drums are a bit loud in the context of the song. In comparison to the other parts and elements they appear to be a little bit too dominant. Therefore, we suggest to keep an eye on the overall leveling, so all parts match together. We also noticed that the snaredrum has a lot of energy in the lower mid frequencies. It might be good to use an EQ on the snare to get the “mud” out of the mix and add some clarity to this particular signal. In addition, it's noticeable that your mix is a bit thin and powerless. This means that your mix lacks a solid bass range compared to the loud drums. However, the guitars work pretty good for the song although they do show a little bit of an artificial touch.

The following screenshot shows a picture of a spectral analyser where you see the frequency curves of your mix. The lower curve describes the average energy level, whereas the upper curve shows the corresponding peak hold per band:

Gesamt-Score

Ø 6.0

Likes
(Öffentlich)
4

Stimmen wurden abgegeben.

Kommentare

Hier gelten die Community-Regeln, wie sie in der Netiquette festgehalten sind.

(( comment.username )) hat am (( comment.datetime )) eine Bewertung mit (( comment.avg_score | round)) Punkten abgegeben.
(( comment.username )) schrieb am (( comment.datetime ))
  • Song
  • Songwriting: (( comment.songwriting ))
  • Arrangement: (( comment.arrangement ))
  • Performance: (( comment.performance ))
  • Sound
  • Frequenzbild: (( comment.frequencies ))
  • Räumlichkeit: (( comment.spaciality ))
  • Dynamik: (( comment.dynamics ))
  • Lautstärkeverhältnisse: (( comment.loudness ))

(( comment.content ))

Hier gelten die Community-Regeln, wie sie in der Netiquette festgehalten sind.

(( child.username )) antwortete am (( child.datetime ))

(( child.content ))


Mehr Kommentare anzeigen